changes_in及my及hometown_天天热点评

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一、题文

假设你是林涛，上个月回到了家乡，发现变化很大，请根据下面的中文提示，以"ChangesinMyHometown"为题，写一篇短文。词数100左右。【提示】1.我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或步行出行。 2.现在已经变成了现代化的城镇，建起座座高楼，随处可见宽阔的马路。我们居住的小区门口有许多公交车经过，许多人都已买了私家车，出行方便。 3.家乡的变化也带来了许多麻烦，例如：… 4.你的想法是…ChangesinMyHometown

二、解答

ChangesinMyHometownI"m Lin Tao. I went back to my hometown last month . Great changes have taken place in recent years.My hometown used to be a quiet small town. There were green hills and clean water. 【高分句型一】The air was fresh. People went around by bike or on foot.（我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇，山清水秀，空气清新。人们骑自行车或步行出行。）But now it has become a modern town. There are many tall buildings and you can see wide roads everywhere. Many buses drive past our community every day. And many people have bought their own cars，so it"s easy to travel around.（现在已经变成了现代化的城镇，建起座座高楼，随处可见宽阔的马路。我们居住的小区门口有许多公交车经过，许多人都已买了私家车，出行方便。） However，the changes of my hometown have also brought us a lot of trouble. For example，the water is not as clean as before. （家乡的变化也带来了许多麻烦）I think we should work together to make our environment much better.【高分句型二】（想法）

三、分析

【高分句型一】There were green hills and clean water.那里有青山碧水。本句使用了there be句型。There be+名词+地点，表示某地有……【高分句型二】I think we should work together to make our environment much better.我认为我们应该共同努力使我们的环境更好。动词不定式 to make our environment much better作目的状语。

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